Sunday, April 12, 2015

Day #12 : river

In great detail describe your favorite room, place, meal, day, or person. Do this in paragraph form, then cut unnececessary words like articles and determiners leaving mainly nouns, verbs, a few adjectives. Cut lines where you see fit. 






river runs past corn stalk acres reached traipsing wooded banks 
sandy ribboned defined channel cuts through prairie summer 
water ankle-deep knee-deep places murky 
across freshwater winding rushing low cool water washing 
surround skin sun-warmed tan
freckled sky open cloudless blue wide 
childhood current's respite felt languid amongst the swirl 
freedom's call to place wild 


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